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 A' L L U K I N - chapter 1 
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    Use beastly vigor to launch across the ravine. Can it go that far? :D

Yep!

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Maddox is understandably freaked out about the entire turn of events as the FUSE gently landed onto the floor.

Ener is quite pleased with the outcome :3


27 Dec 2012 06:20
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Theta
    Woah man that's some awesome stuff right there :D
    Put the fuse in the thingy from before now :3

neurostatictoxin
    WOAHHHHHHHHHH WHUT.

    COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

The Great and Powerful ZombieShooter
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    COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

    yES that

    Also if he David evil use the Welder on him :twisted:


27 Dec 2012 06:22
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    COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

Maddox rather let Ener and his KEEN INSTINCTS do the works. And he would wait for the DOOR to be opened so they can have more detailed discussions in person.

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    Also if he David evil use the Welder on him :twisted:

Maddox is quite prepared for that. Trust him.

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    Put the fuse in the thingy from before now :3

YES!

Ener walks over to the DOOR CONSOLE and insert the FRESH FUSE, replacing the old and useless BLOWN FUSE. Ener closed the PANEL and screw it back in place.

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And it finally ready!


27 Dec 2012 06:23
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    COMMAND:
    Maddox or Ener, whatever: Open door


27 Dec 2012 06:25
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    Maddox or Ener, whatever: Open door

Ener pressed the OPEN BUTTON and await to greet and hopefully bites that jerk of Daniel.

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and the DOOR slid open.

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Now they're suddenly horrified.


27 Dec 2012 06:26
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The Great and Powerful ZombieShooter
    something will be wrong with his under-the-torso area, I bet


27 Dec 2012 06:27
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    something will be wrong with his under-the-torso area, I bet

Oh Ener and Maddox agreed that you have no idea...

<DANIEL>
Guys?

HEY GUYS?

You both looks like you just saw a horrifying monster.

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and so it begins...


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27 Dec 2012 06:29
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TheVoid
    that was awesome.
    ...
    They really should have kept that fuse, in my opinion.

Alamos.
    With the story at first i was like what?
    Then with the ravine i was like wat?
    Then with daniel i was like WAT.

Vurn
    Awesome!

    But he forgot the loaf! :P

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    that was awesome.
    ...
    They really should have kept that fuse, in my opinion.

    Heh, thanks :D well, they couldn't keep the FUSE. They had to open that CORRIDOR DOOR so they can continue to explore the strange bunker place and the "middle of nowhere" too. Plus, they didn't expect to see Daniel looking like that despite his odd rudeness. We would response like that too if we're in the same situation 8)

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    With the story at first i was like what?
    Then with the ravine i was like wat?
    Then with daniel i was like WAT.

    My mission is completed. Expect more of it to come.

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    Awesome!

    But he forgot the loaf!

    That may or may not be important. You will find out.

    Thanks for the compliments, guys! I continue to welcome comments like this in next few days on this thread. This will be my last post until I post the link to the second chapter in near future.

Rooster
    WOOOOOOOOT, second chapter!!!!! :D

neurostatictoxin
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    Awesome!
    But he forgot the loaf!

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    That may or may not be important. You will find out.

    WAIT WHUT. What loaf?

RuloCore
    What's a loaf?

Rooster
    Loaf of bread...First image to the story....

RuloCore
    What bread? I don't remember seeing any bread.

Rooster
    "Oh, and don't forget to bring home a loaf." Read the first page.

RuloCore
    Yeah, but... where's the bread?

neurostatictoxin
    Ohh thanks Roost.

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Yeah, but... where's the bread?

    I'd assume thats when they were first abducted. Assuming they were adducted lol.

Theta
    He ate it, what else would you do with a loaf of bread

TheVoid
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    Heh, thanks well, they couldn't keep the FUSE. They had to open that CORRIDOR DOOR so they can continue to explore the strange bunker place and the "middle of nowhere" too. Plus, they didn't expect to see Daniel looking like that despite his odd rudeness. We would response like that too if we're in the same situation

    Take one of those pieces of scrap metal and put it in between the door way so it can't close, then take out that fuse. IT CAN FLY!

Alamos.
    More like he was doing groceries just before he was abducted.
    I bet at the end theres going to be an alt ending where you forget the bread and get in serious trouble.

YamiX
    That was just one of the best stories I've ever read on this FORUM! Wow, it.. it's amazing, really! It's so nice'cause the story involves you so much :mrgreen:
    Although I hadn't participate of the story, it was like a comic book to me. Awesome!
    I just can't wait for chapter 2! And I'll participate too =)

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    That was just one of the best stories I've ever read on this FORUM!

    and it just about to get better :D

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    I just can't wait for chapter 2! And I'll participate too =)

    you don't have to wait any longer. Chapter 2 is just out :D

    -- CHAPTER 2 - of yawning void --

YamiX
    *freaks out* !!!

Rooster
    Ohh thanks Roost.

    No prob. ;)

    *goes to read what he missed*

Smartguy5000
    OK guys, you know to keep chat in the chat thread.
    Closing this cause it's over for now.


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