A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

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I finished of the story from start to finish in five days,and it was epic.
Btw,where did the blue scarf come from?
Is this my final form?
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I want to join the game, so I was reading previous chapters for a while. Well I just finished third one. Awesome, but a little bit hard to read.
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We should make a summary with all the important things that happened in the previous chapters, as a quick reference guide for people who don't remember all the details or something, don't you think?
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Spoilers!

1 chapter
-introduction to our heroes (Ener, Maddox)
-going to the upper level (S-D)
-introduction to The Void
-first meeting with Daniel
2 chapter
-exploring S-D
-meeting with ELOUF and QUALL
-meeting and killing Dr Dodd
3 chapter
-Elouf joins the party
-Canibal freed
-Elouf runs away
-Meeting with Kelen
-Trapping Canibal
-Meeting with Daniel (again)
-Meeting Ener's wife
-Cutting Daniel
-Goodbye Kelen (you bitch)
-Meeting with The Manager
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Karen
Menager
Kelen and Manager, lol. They would kill you for this. XD
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I'll correct it.
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Images in 22 page in chapter four are broken. Can you post them? I see you aren't posting previous chapters on new forum any more.
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Sublevel 102 wrote:
Karen
Menager
Kelen and Manager, lol. They would kill you for this. XD
The Menager is real, he is! He just manages everyone on the ship that has Meningitis! *rimshot* :lol:
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Oh it fixed itself, somehow. Sorry, I didn't mind to make false-alarm, but I was checking this few times, and couldn't see the pictures. Uhm, now it's good, nevermind.
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  • Paranormal wrote:
    Sublevel 102 wrote:
    Karen
    Menager
    Kelen and Manager, lol. They would kill you for this. XD
    The Menager is real, he is! He just manages everyone on the ship that has Meningitis! *rimshot* :lol:
Nope, not real. And I am not sure if the Manager would be in any shape or form to kill you for this (as of Chapter 7).

But Kelen would :twisted:
  • borys610 wrote:Images in 22 page in chapter four are broken. Can you post them? I see you aren't posting previous chapters on new forum any more.
They will be posted eventually, but they take a lot of work. More so than even I expected them to be.

That's why I skipped straight to Chapter 7 in case I want to post a continuation soon (and I want to, but I am still under the weather with this ridiculous illness in which I pinpointed specifically to a sinus condition).
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